Ngwenya almost got it, well in this case almost does count and I am rating this one as the heat of the week. First verse was too personal, the flow was too nice for a love song, and for the very 1st time ngwenya yi audible which is what he lacks on most songs.
The singing is bad, a yi teka chansi genge but the chance paid out, ni rhandza the originality and the authenticity although I felt like if he had a good singer to hook him up it would be a dope song.
Every English line is whack, that’s where he missed it.
“Loko kuri no vabya mi nga ni tshungurisi / loko kuri no lorha a hi sungurisi, kumbe mi ni pfuxi / mi nga ni phaphamisi / hambi no pfuka ni tsutsuma mi nga ni hlongorisi…”
The song needed only two verses, it is too long for a love song and ri tshiketa ndzilo when it drags for long. I’ll give this a 3.5/5 for the use of Xitsonga, the beat, and the emotions on the hook. The remaining 1.5 was lost ka xilungu na the duration of the track. But all in all, madala yi tirhini.
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